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Jan 28, 2011 19:41:32 GMT -5
Post by strongbrush1 on Jan 28, 2011 19:41:32 GMT -5
great work trogdorman. I'll put them in the script.
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Feb 11, 2011 9:30:32 GMT -5
Post by trogdorman on Feb 11, 2011 9:30:32 GMT -5
I BRING THIS FORUM LIFE!!!! I'm working on some more on the opening gameplay, DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS GAME YET!!!!!
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Feb 20, 2011 23:17:46 GMT -5
Post by trogdorman on Feb 20, 2011 23:17:46 GMT -5
more of the script:
Turn on TV:
Sam: hey look Max, it’s your favorite prime time television show, the wonderful world of traps!
Max: ooh, I’ve seen this one, it tells you how you can squeeze anything swallowed by a rat out of the little bastard, and all you need is some bait, a heavy-like object, a high place, and a super-sensitive trigger device!
Sam: you know, this actually gives me a convoluting yet surprisingly effective idea for our little rat problem.
Max: I keep saying, gas the little bastard!!
Sam: maybe later Max.
Pick up boxing glove
Sam: this may come in “handy” (Chuckles)
Max: someone put me out of my misery!
Kick open desk
Sam: Max you impetuous little rascal! You filled my desk with a bottomless supply of assorted cheese!!
Max: it’s only temporary Sam, in a few months I plan on putting all cheese in the closet from now on!
Sam: where’d you put the nooses and hatchets I was keeping in here?
Max: ….it’s a surprise.
Pick up black light
Sam: it’s Max’s black light. Why do you have this again?
Max: you can never tell when you need to search a room for hidden remains of a murder or a porn-o!
Sam: talking to you makes me feel all clam-chowdery little buddy.
Look at rat hole
Sam: call it dog’s intuition, but I don’t think TALKING to Jimmy is gonna resolve much without enticing the little rodent.
Use Bowling Ball with shelf
Sam: I think it’s time for Lou to reach new heights in life.
Max: I’m in pain.
Look at mousetrap
Sam: it’s Max’s supersensitive mousetrap that goes off when exposed to a loud enough noise.
Max: it’s worth it just to set up a brigade of these babies in a dark alley, and reign down a plague of snapping death!!!
Sam: it’s gonna be difficult to reign down a “plague of snapping death” with only one mousetrap.
Max: …..damn you and your numerical logic.
Use gun with mousetrap, when Jimmy’s NOT out
(Sam fires his gun, the mouse trap sets off and the bowling ball rolls off the shelf and falls in front of the mousetrap)
Max: …fun!
Sam: yeah, but I can’t help but feel that something significant was supposed to happen.
Use cheese with rat hole
Jimmy: (Walks out of his hole) what is this? You pigs trying to bribe me or something? Jimmy Two-Teeth don’t just take bribes of cheese!
Sam: consider it as a peace offering of sorts Jimmy.
Max: better hang on to it, it’s bound to come back up 3 hours later?
Jimmy: why’s that?
Max: nothing!
(Jimmy starts eating at the cheese for 30 seconds)
If you don’t fire the gun before Jimmy stops eating
Jimmy: not bad…make it Swiss next time pigs!
Sam: I’m getting tired of him referring us as pigs.
Max: who cares, he got away again!!
Sam: never fear Sam, I mean Max! we still have an unlimited supply of cheese left, and Jimmy has the appetite clock of an over-caffeinated chipmunk doing 88 miles on the bullet train.
Max: that makes 3 of us!
Use gun with mousetrap WHILE Jimmy’s eating
(Sam fires the gun, the mousetrap goes off, causing the bowling ball to roll off the shelf and fall, squishing Jimmy, the keys and some extra cash fly out)
Max: ooh! Can we do it again Sam? I wanna see if I can make his flattened pelt into a decorative cabin rug!
Sam: maybe later Max. (Picks up the keys and money) eww, so that’s what edam cheese feels like before hitting the digestive tract.
Max: WHAT?! I told that bastard that I wanted chedam and brick cheese only!!! Someone’s ass is grass if I don’t get my brick cheese!!!!
Sam: you’d never finish the whole brick Max.
Max: who said it was for eating?
Jimmy: …you tricked me!!
Max: I prefer the term “made an ass out of.”
Jimmy: whatever! This ain’t over! (Scurries out the window)
Max: damn it! He got away again!
Sam: settle Max, we can hunt and disembowel him later. For now, we got three ridiculous and half-assed cases to take care of.
Max: ok, can I still keep the severer?
Sam: not until I figure out where you’d keep it.
Max: that’s none of your damn business.
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Feb 21, 2011 2:07:02 GMT -5
Post by cyrus on Feb 21, 2011 2:07:02 GMT -5
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Feb 21, 2011 19:54:14 GMT -5
Post by trogdorman on Feb 21, 2011 19:54:14 GMT -5
alright, I just need some time first. I'm still in college and part-time movie maker so I got other projects to work on, BUT I AIN'T GIVING UP YET!!!! .....plus I REALLY wanna see a demo playthrough soon
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Feb 25, 2011 18:21:12 GMT -5
Post by vyse220 on Feb 25, 2011 18:21:12 GMT -5
I think all the dialogue are good guys, however after the intro and the opening sequence we should cut out the talking and just made the player take the control because it can became frustrating, for example:
this part can simply be Sam answering the phone in a hit the road style, further information can be acquired during the gameplay
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